English novel (other/otra)

HI:
Well, I´m very very very bad at speaking english, but I´m going to write a novel in this lenguage, I hope you would like it and let a comment, I write thins, also because some of the people that read my blog, want to practice their english and I think this is a good way to practice, I´m going to side the story part in part, so I start, much love for all people who read me :)

Prologue. "THE FIRST MEETING."

I was in the wood, and I thought that there I was safe, but I was wrong. I saw a blaze, "what could it be?"I thought, it couldn´t be an animal, and isn´t pobable a person. As my dad taught  me when I was a child, I went to ask the people of the blaze if they needed something. But I soon realized that my dad also taught me that in the wood its better to call someone, and when I turned back to go to home, I heard a voice, it was a woman´s voice, she was crying so I decided to go with her. I ran to the place from which the voice came, and while I was running, the voice was going away, like if it was running away from me, and when I stoped, I was in a part of the forest without trees, I heard the cry in that place, but I didn´t saw anything there, and then I heard the cry in all directions. What was happening there?
I looked better and I saw the blace again, I forced the view and I could see that it was actually a girl, he wasn´t more than seven years old, and he was not crying. "Go out, run away of that girl" said something inside me.


PS: I forgot to say that I don´t have a tittle, could you help me please? THANKS ;)